Thursday, 30 October 2014

My commet to fano

Hi fano.
I like the way you write your story keep it upmake shore it makes sense and don't forget to use fullstops and capital letters and explanation mark. and i like the way you read and write your storys well done keep it up make shore you dont make mistakes

30 October 2014 09:39
My commet to fano i chose this one because it had exciting wors on it. from justin-tyler.

Thursday, 16 October 2014

My trip to a lovely ambry farm

I saw a cow at am bury farm and I felt good last term it our topic learn new new things about cows and adder animals.
we had to feed the little lambs and we went to the shaving sheep's this lady puled this shaving tool out and start shaving the sheep. and we feed the rosters and we made butter in a Coltaner.
and also saw some pigs one name pumpkin and we pat the goats. and we got to pat the cow and see where the