Monday, 4 November 2013

Prompt Practise 2

On a sunny afternoon we went to the beach, it was very sunny and then their was lots of people at the Beach. We went to the water and we went on the big waves then we saw some people sleeping on their chairs. Some people were playing in the waves, but some were on their chairs, it was very hot and sunny. After that someone was on the wave trying to get out but he got lost. The people rain out and tried to save him but they couldn't save him. After that they had to jump out of the water so they went and took him to the hospital and they put him on a bed.

1 comment:

  1. Some good sentence starters here JT. Make sure that you remember to use fullstops and capital letters when you are writing sentences.